Mark Sho's Pitch

Mark Sho’s Idea

The topic I chose is the future of cosmetic

This idea that I have is I wanted to be a commercial about the product.

The commercial will have real people discussing about how great the product is and how it made them beautiful.  Also they felt very comfortable they finally could go outside and just enjoy their life and do not have to worry about anything. This is a revolution product ever made. It does not cost so much that people cannot afford. Also not only that the company are so sure that everyone will love this product that they decided to give a monthly payment plan and there is no interest fee. It will cost only 9.99 for one year and this product you do not need a refill is just one time and you are set for life. This product helps get rid of acne.

There are just way too many products that say “Oh this is the product will guarantee to get rid of acne” but reality they just do not work. And people will be spending 100 and 100 of dollars. Also people might have allergic reaction to it and they do not know what it will cause to them and sometimes it might harm them. For instance I am allergic to benzoyl peroxide which really sucks because most acne products contain that. My face just becomes so swollen that it just looks like a tomato.

This great revolution product is 100 percent work and you do not have to worry about what the product contains. The product I assure no one will have allergic reaction to it. This product is so well done that the whole industries uses it. I am proud to tell you this great product is called Photoshop. How this work I tell you let’s say you got a crazy looking pimple ready to burst now all you have to do is one simple little click of a touch tool and your acne is gone. You can do it many times and you would not stop looking at your photos. You love how you look so much that you will be glad to show the whole world. Hey who knows you can be the next model star that you dream of or get pay to be a model. Now even better let say you have some discoloration all you have to do is find the color of the skin you like and walla you got even tones and plus if your painter now that’s even better you can use different brushes and you can do different tricks to make yourself more sexier and it’s easy to learn. Now you do not have to worry about acne anymore this is the new future of cosmetic. Thank you.